Wednesday, March 28, 2012

"This is the story of my death - both of them."

This is another first liner, one I came up with. It's easily not the best of the one's I've done, but it's nice to have those every now and then to keep you humble. :)


This is the story of my death – both of them. So how am I writing this now? Simple, I know I’m going to die, no physician can save me. I lie now in my deathbed, my last act being to write this story. Maybe that way, the punishment will be less severe for the survivors.

Know this, that it was my own acts that led me here. I hold no malice for those who have survived. I deserve the blame for all that has happened, none of which was what we wanted. We thought we'd make a difference, we thought we were doing good. The thought never crossed our minds that we were the villains of this tale.


2 comments:

  1. Not a good one?? It sounds freaking amazing! Oh wait, you're trying to be humble...um... bad Shannan....

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  2. wait... is this all? just two paragraphs? I don't understand...

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